写得一般般
[quote:ea79c071ac="wsq3935566"]小心你的how are you doing 把人吓跑了！！ :P[/quote:ea79c071ac] 看了大家的回复。很感动。但有一点不明白。为什么 HOW ARE YOU DOING 会把人下跑，这不是与陌生人增进了感情了吗？ 请大家指点
终于知道了团结就是力量，说的有多么正确。
说不出来的感觉，但是不是很好的感觉，呵呵，恕我直言！
我的开发信同11楼的！
写信最基本的东西都忘了，格式，署名之类的基本楼主还要好好加强。。。
感觉有点简单
加上你们公司的产品，你知道他是做什么的，也要让客户更好的了解你们啊。
正在学习。。。。。。
下面是别人写的，我贴上来大家参考下咯~ KCT Co., Ltd. Jeonju High-Tech Venture Complex, #750-1, Palbokdong 2-Ga, Deukjin-Gu, Jeonju-Si, Chullabuk-Do, TEL : 82-63-212-6056 FAX : 82-63-212-6059 REPLY September 10, 2006 To : . Subject : Supplier of Hard wood Charcoal Polymer based Kitchenware Dear Sir / Madam, It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relation ship with you. Your company name and email address have been introduced by e-Marketplace. KCT Co., Ltd. is one of the best professional company to develop and manufacture functional and new materials. KCT Co., Led. is manufacturing hardwood charcoal polymer that can be applied to our daily goods with its antimicrobial effect, deodorization and infrared ray (Examples: Hardwood charcoal polymer receptacle, chopping board, food waste collecting container and bedclothes). In addition, we have developed and are currently manufacturing the antistatic laminated sheet which can be used semi-permanently; replacing a disposable papers sheet used for loading goods on the pallet. In order to diversify our existing market, we are interested in supplying our high quality products to you on favorable terms and conditions. Upon receipt of your inquiries. For more information, we would like to let you know our company web site as below. If you are interested in our products, please contact us at any time. Hope to hear good news from you. We thank you very much for your attention and look forward to your reply soon. Sincerely Yours, Oh, Kyu Bong
好像太简单了
现在对开发信 都没感觉了 不知道怎么了 ？ 加油 还是写的很棒的
感觉太简单了，对人家的吸引力不够大
为什么说HOW ARE YOU DOING会把客人吓跑？不明白？
应该改一下吧。
小心你的how are you doing 把人吓跑了！！ :P
不错学习了
上来HOW ARE YOU DOING ?最好改一下，还有最好让客户浏览一下你们公司的网站 :D
your mail is similar to mine。 :D
