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    (转)如何回复邮件(4)
    Browse volume:343 | Reply:1 | Release time:2011-07-07 18:08:54

    坦白说,会的!我曾经问过很多客人,美国的,德国的,巴西的,智利的,日本的,香港的,台湾的,泰国的,等等,除了港台的trading有的时候会看一下之外,其余的国外客人几乎都告诉我,凡是收到类似于这样的邮件,通通删掉。因为他们觉得这些没用,他们哪天需要sourcing的时候,很容易能找到一大堆,这些email根本无需保存。
          

    所以我们只能钻空子,尽量给客人一点犹豫,怀疑是不是曾经联系过你,见过你,或者问你询过价,客人不会好意思地直接问你,我们认识么?
          

    开发信本身就是骚扰对方的,成交率相当低。所以我们要想尽一切办法,即使把它提高1个百分点,也比没有好啊,不是么?

    我简单地改了一下,你看看哦:

    Dear sir,

    Glad to hear that you're the leading retailer of bathrooms! We specialize in cast iron bathtubs for 17 years, and hope to find a way to cooperate with you!

    Attached some pictures for your review. Please contact me if any questions.

    Thanks and best regards,
    ***


    你还是写得太长了,能用1个词绝对不用两个,能用1句话写清楚就绝不用两句,写邮件要惜字如金啊!

    新的东西来了~ 这边先谈谈以前的一个德国客人给我的建议,我把他原文附上,但是名字和公司我删掉了,其他一字不改,大家看看,至于我说的那个案例,会陆陆续续放上来的!

    Dear C,

    As you mentioned last time, how to write a right email, pls find my reply as follows:

    1) short
    2) short
    3) short again
    4) delete all extra words
    5) make everything clear
    6) that's ok, order comes, ah~

    Have a nice day!

    N


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    俊王

    Very good

    2011-07-07 19:05:39
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